The drums feel a bit too fuzzy at the beginning and with the filtered synths they're making the first half kind of dampened or "muddy". Maybe spicing up the buildup with a solo could help.
Yuki Kajiura's "Mezame" comes to mind for example, where the upbeat theme boots off after a flamenco-style lead in the intro.
Great job nevertheless! Kudos!
Awesome thanks for the input man :) where abouts do you think the solo should be? I've already got one at the end. Do you not think it'd be over kill?
Do you mean clarity with drums? Or what's being played? :)
Thanks man!
I like the progression and the low-bit instrumentation. It could be spiced up a bit with some rhythm breaks or fills that add some "funk", especially toward the end. Maybe the second half could introduce an additional layer of a harsher brass or string synth to make it feel more energetic. I'd also blend that last FX swell with the end a bit, just enough to prevent it from feeling completely disconnected from the finish.
I love the work on the vocal samples! This track kind of fluctuates between deep house and downtempo. A bit raw, a bit short, but definitely not bad. I'd give more time and granularity for the buildup and each section, maybe add a direct return to the house section from the downtempo part. Maybe a little compression to the kick would also improve some of the "muddy" feel I hear in the second part.
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